Finally did some writing – just not with Chapter X. I did manage to get some edits done for Chapter II and for the prologue. They both turned out well, although I’m certain I’ll be visiting the prologue again. I really need to get this finished (as I continue to explain). I really want to submit to Baen by the end of the year – or hopefully the end of summer would be nice. Took out the scene with the rabbit-thing and instead made it so that Tanner and Argent meet directly after she ends up in Ghostalia. He also finds out that she is the princess sooner. I’m hoping to work more on X tonight, but will probably do some edits for IV, so that everything coincides with II – as IV was previously were Argent first encounters Tanner. I don’t think I will keep Conall in there at all, and if I do, it will only be as Aaron’s pet…which gives me an idea. I’ve been trying to think of a weapon that is rightfully his. Maybe it will be a special weapon (not sure what yet) specially crafted by Abel, that has the ability to shift into a Cian cat. At the beginning of each new prince’s (at least the owner of the weapon) life, it will be reborn as a Cian kitten and live its life again, sort of like the legend of the phoenix.
Also pondering a resurrection issue with Galtero’s wife, but will have to incorporate more back story into the third novel. Also had a brief thought about Tanner being framed for a crime in the third book. I’ll jump off that bridge when I get to the top, I guess.
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